Mash Method Scripting

Today in my Electronic Media Writing class with Rob Williams we learned different formats of scripting. We took our two column script and turned it into a mash script using this banned video from this past weekend's Supper Bowl-



Here is what my mash method script looks like-

ESTABLISHING SHOT: LOLA AND DANICA EXTERIOR OF HOUSE WITH CAR
Cheesy piano music through out script
DANICA: Meet Lola

CLOSE UP SHOT: LOLA'S FOOTBALL PORTRAIT
DANICA: The day he retired from football...

MEDIUM SHOT: DANICA WITH PORTRAIT
DANICA: ... Lola started chasing his biggest dream...

WIDE SHOT: FASHION DRESSING ROOM
DANICA: ... a business of his own!

DANICA CROSS LEFT TOWARDS CAMERA
DANICA: Lola's firs step?

CAMERA ZOOM IN
DANICA: We built his website...

CLOSE UP ON LOLA'S FACE
DANICA: ...at GoDaddy.com

MEDIUM SHOT: LOLA SITTING AT DESK, DANICA CROSS TO LOLA'S UPPER SHOULDER
DANICA: And with GoDaddy's easy to use e-commerce tools, Lola...

MEDIUM SHOT: OVER LOLA'S SHOULDER COMPUTER WITH LOLA'S WEBSITE
DANICA: ...was soon selling his own line to the world.

CLOSE UP: PAN LEFT ON LOLA'S FACE- EXCITING SMILING
LOLA: Woo weeee!!

WIDE ESTABLISHING SHOT: POOL AREA WITH GUESTS, LOLA FLOATS RIGHT ON RAFT, DANICA IN FRONT, TURNS TO LOLA

DANICA: Lola dreams big, And who's to argue?

CUT TO: GODADDY.COM LOGO

GoDaddy Music play

DANICA: See more now at GoDaddy.com